Outline
Introduction
-thesis: There is a dream in the
American, there is one day that they can restore the Eden where is place full
with happiness, and this belief will accompany with American’s technological
drive.
Body 1
Topic sentence: Eden exists in settlers’ mind
forever.
Details: describe the relation between Eden and
settler. And describe the how important Eden is in settler’s mind.
Body 2
Topic sentence: America is a good place for restore
Eden.
Details: describe the early American environment. Use
the quote to show how beautiful America is. America can be transform into a new
Eden.
Body 3
Topic sentence: An image of
machine in the garden became blueprint to restore Eden.
Details: list some of artist’s
idea about new Eden. That’s blueprint of restore Eden.
Body 4
Topic sentence: Technology
development is in order to restore Eden.
Details: describe the technology
can help American restore the Eden. Technology can change the world.
Body 5
Topic sentence: There are many
American inventors and their inventions contribute for restore Eden.
Detail: list the inventor and
invention that give convenience to American life.
Body 6
Topic sentence: Technology protect environment for
restore Eden.
Detail: list some example that
technology be used to protect environment.
Conclusion
Restoring Eden will encourage American
technology development to create a happiness nation for American forever.
1. Does
the outline meet the criteria we discussed on the 12th? How? How not?
I am not sure. If I did not miss any
step, I think the outline meet the criteria we discussed. It includes the
thesis, topic sentence and simple detail.
2. Would
it have been more helpful to make the outline before writing the first draft or
after? Why?
I think it’s helpful to make the outline
after writing the first draft. Because when we are writing an essay, we will
edit the essay many times. Sometime you will change the outline that you make
before the first draft. If you make an outline after you finish the first
draft, the outline can help you check your essay’s structure. And you can find
some problem in your essay when you writing an outline. Thus, I think it is
more helpful to make the outline after finish the first draft.
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